Author's Comments:

alexisneo,

I'm actually disliking this page :( I know I say that a lot but... errr this one is too busy... I shall maybe fix it later so it's easier on the eyes xD

4 more pages until the end of the chapter!!! isn't it exciting!? :)And the pages are all sketched out too~ plus the next chapter cover is finito as well B-D wooten and a tooten~ <3

enjoy the update!

User's Comments:

MakiTakami,

Ah!! This is getting very interesting 8D

DakuDaku,

O_O Is that...barbed wire? Oooh.

takashinakamura,

yikes what an interesting concept...parallel universe? i luv it!

desertkitt,

Dude... that's a very interesting way to spin things... and this page explains a lot, so it's allowed to be crowded or busy.

Jude K.A. Boi,

A parallel universe?! Zounds!

mayako-chan,

waah~ cool *-*' I like those "dream stalkers" and "dream control" concepts n_n

It's getting more and more interesting :D

Line-chan,

I agree with Mayako-chan *3*

Oo_Orange_oO,

!!
I just realized this was still chapter 1! So much happened hahaha! Not that this is a bad thing, I am enjoying your comic so far very thoroughly.

I think this page is fine! Where do you get your tones? They're very pretty. I've been hunting for some since I got my CS2. ^^

alexisneo,

@ Oo_Orange_oO: I get most of my screentones from http://psychobob.xepher.net/screentonez/ x3 but the rest of them I just find on random sites, you can find a lot of good brushes on DA :D

Kaiverta,

Whoah, how interesting. O o

Lugbzurg,

WAY better and more threatening that any kind of Arancar, I'd say!